下面这篇写得不错： 　　Aningterestingtrip 　　IhavebeentomanyinterestingplacesinYiwu,butIhavenotbeentomanyotherpartsofChinayet.LastmonthIwenttotheWestLakewhereisafamousscenicspotinHangzhouwithmyfamilybybus. 　　Thesceneryaroundthelakewasverybeautiful.Thereweremanytalltreesandbeautifulflowers.Somepeoplewerewalkingaroundthelakeandsomepeoplewereboatingonthelake.Weplayednearthelakeandenjoyedthebeautifulscenery.Eachofuslostourselvesinthebeautifulscenery.Suddenlyitrained.Weranintherainandwewereallwet.Butwewereveryhappy.Afterawhiletherainstopped.Theskybecameverycolourful.“Howbeautifulitis!”Isaidtomyself. 　　Intheafternoonwewentbackhomebytrain.Mytripseemedveryshort,butmymemoryofthepleasanttripwilllastlong.