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大家帮我看看这作文的语法有什么问题帮我改出来好不?Mynameis**.I'magirl,15yearsold.BorninBeijing.TherearesomanyreasonswhyIchoosetostudyaboardinNewZealand,theadvantagesIcantakeareincredible.Thegreates
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大家帮我看看这作文的语法有什么问题帮我改出来好不?
Mynameis**.I'magirl,15yearsold.BorninBeijing.TherearesomanyreasonswhyIchoosetostudyaboardinNewZealand,theadvantagesIcantakeareincredible.
ThegreatestadvantageistheabilitytobemoreproficientinspokenEnglish.AndStudyabroadcanexerciseourcapacityforindependentliving.Themostimportantthingistostudyabroadstudentscanreceiveadvancededucationabroad.
Environmentoflivingandlearningisalsoabigadvantage.NewZealandwasnamed"Themostsuitablecountryforliving"byU.N.Studentcanstudyinasafeandcomfortableenvironmenteffectively.
That'sthereasonwhyiwanastudyaboardinNewZealand.
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Mynameis**.I'magirl,15yearsold,【born】inBeijing.TherearesomanyreasonswhyIchoosetostudyaboardinNewZealand.TheadvantagesIcantakeareincredible.
ThegreatestadvantageistheabilitytobemoreproficientinspokenEnglish.And【studying】abroadcan【provideuscapacityoflivingindependently】.Themostimportantthingis【that】【studying】abroadstudentscanreceiveadvancededucationabroad.
Environmentoflivingandlearningisalsoabigadvantage.NewZealand【iscalled】"Themostsuitablecountryforliving"byU.N.Studentcanstudyinasafeandcomfortableenvironment【efficiently】.
【Sucharethereasons】whyiwanastudyaboardinNewZealand.
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