问题标题：
帮忙改一篇英文的oralchinesenewyearGoodmorning,everybody.IwanttotellyouaboutChinesenewyearinHongkongChinesenewyearisaholidayinfebruarysomepeopletraveltochinapeopleinhongkonghaveafamilygatheringwevisitourfam
问题描述：
帮忙改一篇英文的oral
chinesenewyear
Goodmorning,everybody.IwanttotellyouaboutChinesenewyearinHongkong
Chinesenewyearisaholidayinfebruary
somepeopletraveltochina
peopleinhongkonghaveafamilygathering
wevisitourfamily,wekeepourhousecleanandtidy
wegetredpacketfromparents,auntieandgrandmother
weeatChinesenewyearpudding,melonseedsanddumplings
wecanseethefireworksatvictoriaharbor
wealsoseedragondancing
IlikeChinesenewyearbecauseigetredpacketsandwewithareanothergoodluck,wewithourfriendsaluckyear
我的文章是这样的,老师说这样的文章只能及格左右
他希望我想一些其他主意
帮帮忙修改下加一些句子（另外的一些春节的习俗啊之类的尽量用一些简单易懂的单词和句子）
和检查下有没有错误
捣乱的别来
分可以在加50-150
石明洪回答：
Topic:ChineseNewYearGoodMorningeverybody.IwanttotellyouaboutChineseNewYearinHongKong.Thisyear,ChineseNewYearfellon3rdFebruarywhichisapublicholiday.ChinesefamiliesinHo...
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