最近写的英语短文,（50分）

Hello,everyonehere.TodayIliketogivemypresentationabouttodayandtomorrow.

weknowthattherearemanydiscussionsaboutthetopic,whichteachustostressontodaybutnotwastethetime,tomorrowisfaraway,weneedtodoourtaskthat'sshouldbedonetodayandcan'tbelefttodotomorrow,sotoday'stopicIwanttogivemyopinionaboutthetopic.

First,weknowwehavetopasstoday,withouttodaywecan'thavetomorrow,somanyofussaytodayismoreimportantthantomorrow.However,it’ssafetosaythatwecan'tmisstomorrow.Ifwehaveaverysaddaytoday,westillwanttohaveagoodtimetoday;theanswerisofcoursenot.Wehopewecanhaveanewhappydaytomorrow,andforgetaboutthethingstoday.What’smore,lotsofphilosopherssaythattheworkneedtobedoneshouldbefinishtodaybuttolasttomorrow.Yes,it'strueweneedtodoourjobintherighttimeinourability,butwecanseethatifwecan’tendurethehardworktoday,doweneedtogoonourworktoday,wereallycan’tputittomorrow.Ifwehaveagoodrest,don'twepresentabettertask?Thereisathingwemustknowthatlotsofcelebritiesdiedbecauseofthehardworkoneday.SoIbelievethatwecandothethingstomorrowandtheresultwillbebetter.

Second,asthefamouswritherZhuZiqingsaidinhisfamouswritingthatwewastetimewhateverwedo,wethink,thenwewastetime,wewash,thenwewastetime,wereadbooksthenwewastetime...

Ican’tagreewithwhathesaid.Theinterestingthinginourlifeisnothingbutsadaboutthetimewelost.Ibelievethatourhappinessinlifeisjustenjoyingthesmallthingshappentoday,nomatterwhetherisimportanttoourtask,ourstudy.Maybewhenweareold,wewillrememberthatthesmallthingshappeninacommondaybutnotstudyandstudy.soweneedtopayattentiontotoday,butthereisnoneedsforustodotheonlythingsthatisusefulforourfuture,weshouldlovetoday,lovethesunshine,lovethewind,andlovethesnowmaybe.

That’sall,everyone,Ihopemypresentationwillgiveyouquitedifferentviewabouttodayandtomorrow.

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