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【我得讲一篇短文改错,但是我的英语水平很烂,改时写清为什么吧,最好详细点,Ihavebeenplaypianoforfouryears.Lastyearwheniheardthenewswhichtherewasgoingtobeapianoperformancecameupinafewweeks,Ifeltve】
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我得讲一篇短文改错,但是我的英语水平很烂,改时写清为什么吧,最好详细点,
Ihavebeenplaypianoforfouryears.Lastyearwheniheardthenewswhichtherewasgoingtobeapianoperformancecameupinafewweeks,Ifeltverynervous.Finallycamethatday.whenwearrivedattheconcerthall,myhandstartedshakingexpectedly.However,justlookingatmyteacher'swarmfacelethimgetbackself-confidence.Whenitwasmyturntoperform,Igoupthestageandplayedthepiecefrombeginningtoanendpleasantly.Soon,thecheersfilledtheconcerthall.Ifeltveryhappyandveryproudmyself.Thatismyfirstpianoperformance,butIwillneverforgetitfortherestofmylife.
一共有十处错误,每句话不超过两处.
匡兵回答：
1.Ihavebeenplaying
havebeendoingsth是现在完成进行时
（不是Ihavebeenplayed,这是我被耍了的意思好吗...-_-||）
2.thenewsthat
that作为连词
3.performancecomingup
comingup是后置定语
4.myhands
改成复数
（这我不太确定有没有那么容易...）
5.letme
句子的主语是我,me
6.Iwentup
go的过去式动词went
7.theend
那首曲子的结尾,应该要是the
8.proudof
固定用语proud+of
9.Thatwas
is的过去式was
10.andIwill
but是转折介词,在这里和前后句子的含义有矛盾,因此用and替代.
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