我写了一篇作文,谁帮我看看,找些错误(我才初一啊)
Ihaveadream
Whenlamboy,lwanttobeanastronaut.Ithinkitisveryinterestingandfunny.butnowIamdiffident,Ithinkitistoohard.Ihavenotanyhope.SoIhaveanewdream:Iwillbeaneconomist.MybeyouaresurpisedwhyIwanttobeaneconomist.letmetellyou:Inwinterhoilday,Ireadabook(货币战争).Ittalksabouttheeconomics’shistoryandfact.Itisreallyinterestingandexciting.Butitistoodepthandmybeyouwillbeapoorman.Ireadthisbookallhoilday,itisgivemethetruewaytotheconfidence.Anditisalsodifficult.ButIdonotgiveup.IthinkIwillbeagoodeconomist.Beausethatismyfavouritejob.WhenIhaveadream,itcantellmehowtobesuccess.SoatthefirstIwillstudyinXiaMenUniversityorRenMinUniversitythenIwillgoabroadtolearnmore.Next,Iwillworkinabanktobearichman.AtlastIwillworkatWallStreet.Iwillmakemylifecolorful,thatismylastdream.Ilookforwardtothefuturewithconfidence.