帮忙修改下作文好波.
ComputerGames
Computergamesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularallovertheworld.Justaseverycoinhastwosides.computergameshavebothadvantagesanddisadvantages.
Amajorityofpeoplethinkthatplayingcomputergamesiswrong.Nowmoreandmorepeoplewallowincomputergames.Youmayoftenhearsomenewsaboutsomeonewhodiedofplayingcomputergames.Undertheinfluenceofcomputergames.Manypeopledon’twanttostudyandwork.
However.Peopledifferintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathatcomputergamesaregoodforus,Playingcomputergamescanpracticereactionsandideation.
It’sdifficulttosaywhetherplayingcomputergamesisgood.Personally,Ibelievethatwecandobetterifweplaycomputergameswisely.Whenwegettived.wecanplaycomputergamesforawhiletorelaxourselves.
看下语法，单词拼写什么的有问题吗，过几天就要交了。还需要补充甚么么。初三的水平。