英语文章求用高级句子修改3.1Ourecosystemandthewildlife3.1.1Protectingourecosystem.Withthedevelopmentoftheindustryandagriculture,theenvironmentproblemsbecomemoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.Treesonthehillshave|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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英语文章求用高级句子修改3.1Ourecosystemandthewildlife3.1.1Protectingourecosystem.Withthedevelopmentoftheindustryandagriculture,theenvironmentproblemsbecomemoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.Treesonthehillshave

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英语文章求用高级句子修改

3.1Ourecosystemandthewildlife

3.1.1Protectingourecosystem.

Withthedevelopmentoftheindustryandagriculture,theenvironmentproblemsbecomemoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.Treesonthehillshavebeencutdownandwastewaterisbeingpouredcontinuouslyintorivers.Carsmakegreatnoisesandgiveoffpoisonousgas.

FromthisFigureitcanbeseenthatmostofpeoplethoughtourecosystemwasdestroyed.Theybelievetheearthquakesandfloodshappenfrequentlyduetohumandestroyedourecosystembalance.Someonethoughtthatwewereingoodcondition,so,theywereagainstit.Another20%oftherespondentshadnotclearidea,notonlycouldtheyseepositiveeffect,buttheyalsocouldseethenegativepart.

Therearesomesuggestionstoprotectourecosystem.

1.Newlawsmustbepassedtoplacestrictcontroloverindustrialpollution.

2.Thepublicmustreceivetheeducationaboutthehazardofpollution

3.Asacivilizer,wehaveadutytoprotectourecosystem.Soweshoulddosomethingwecandotoprotectit

Inmyopinion,theearthisourhomeandwehavethedutytotakecareofitforourselvesandforourlatergenerations.Ihopetheproblemwillbesolvedinthenearfutureandourhomewillbecomebetterandbetter.

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　　建议你做以下的修改：　　3.1Our(E)cosystemandthe(W)ildlife(标题：需要大写) 　　With(increased)developmentoftheindustryandagriculture,theenvironment(al)problems(have)becomemoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.Everyday,treesarebeingcutdown,wastewaterisbeingpouredintorivers,andcarsaremakingalotofnoisesandproducingpoisonousgasintotheair.(还需要一,二句话来阐述生态与大自然的关系,作为总结以下要讨论的观点.) 　　3.1.1ProtectingOurEcosystem(建议你用斜体字) 　　AsillustratedinthefollowingFigure,whenaskedaboutthequestion.,agreatmajorityoftherespondents(提供%)thoughtthatourecosystemhadbeendestroyed.Theybelievedthattheearthquakesandfloodshappenedsofrequentlynowadayscouldbelargelyattributabletothedestructionofthebalanceofecosystembyhumans.Onthecontrary,asmallnumbertherespondents(提供%)disagreedandthoughtthatourecosystemandwildlifewereingoodcondition.Another20%oftherespondentshadnoclear-cutopinionaboutthisissue.Theyrecognizedboththepositiveandnegativesidesoftheproblems. 　　Thereareseveralsuggestionstoprotectourecosystem: 　　1.Newlawsmustbepassedtoplacestrictcontroloverindustrialpollution; 　　2.Thepublicmustreceiveeducationaboutthehazardofpollution;and 　　3.Asacivilizedcitizen,wehaveadutytoprotectourecosystem. 　　Whatshouldwedotoprotectourecosystem?Inmyopinion,theearthisourhomeandwehavetheobligationtotakecareofit,notjustforourselvesbutalsoforourlatergenerations.Ihopetheproblemwillbesolvedinthenearfutureandourearthwillbecomeabetterandbetterplacetolive.

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