我去过上海 　　Ihavebeentomanyinterestingplaces.ButIloveShanghaibest.Lastsummer,IwenttoShanghaiforvacation.Shanghaiisaverybeautifulcity.Therearemanytallbuildings,cars,amusementparksandpeopleinShanghai.Ihadbeentoabigamusementpark,itwasveryinteresting!AndIhadagoodtimeintheamusementpark.Ihadbeentoaspacemuseum,itwasverygreat.AndIalsowentshoppinginShanghai.IwouldliketogotoShanghaiagain. 　　我已经去了许多有趣的地方.但是我最爱的是上海.去年夏天,我去了上海度假.上海是一个很美丽的城市.在上海,有许多高楼大厦,小轿车,游乐园和人.我去了一个很大的游乐园,那里非常有趣.我在那里玩得非常开心.我去了一个太空博物馆,那里十分地壮观.我也在上海购物,买了东西.我愿意再去上海玩. 　　我去过广州 　　TherearemanytrafficaccidentsinGuangzhoueveryyear.Somedriverslikeeatingfoodormakingtelephonecallswhentheyaredrivingcars.That'ssodangrous!Andsomedriverswillfeelsleeplyandtiredwhenthey'redrivingcars.It'sverydangrous,too.Sowhenyoufeeltired,don'tdriveyourcars.Someonewilldrinkbeerbeforetheydrivecarsordrivingcars.Ifsomeonetalkswithothers,itwillbealsoverydangrous.So,allthedrivers,pleasebecarefulwhenyouaredrivingcars. 　　我到过万里长城 　　vitingtheGreatWallonBadaling 　　Itisfinetoday.IwithmyparentstovisittheGreatWallonBadaling. 　　Wesetoutearlyinthemorning.Wefirsttookthebus.On 　　reachedthefootoftheGreatWall,Iwasattractedbythe 　　landscapeimmediately."Whatawonder!"Isaidrepeatedlyandmeontothecablecaratonce.Wegotaviewofthebeautiful 　　scenery.Afterawhile,wegottotheGreatWall.Iwasvery 　　excited.Itouchedthebricksfrequently.MyfatherexplainedtomewhenandhowweChinesebuiltthewall.Ilistenedwith 　　greatinterest.Whenweenteredaturret,Iwasmorecurious. 　　Dadtoldmewhattheturretwasandwhatitwasbuiltfor. 　　"Itwasreallyanamazingachievement!"Igaspedwithadmirationandtookseveralphotos.Unconsciously,wefoundwehadreachedtheSteleofBraveMan,thesymboloftheGreat 　　Wall.