求修改英语作文

1,有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作,

2,有些人,喜欢经常换工作是因为

3,我的看法

MYviewinjobhopping

Nowadays,differentkindofjobcanbechoosedbypeopleandmanyofthemholdajobforalongtimes,Foronething,theythink,stayajobforlongtimestheycangetmanyexperienceswhicharebenifictodoingoneworkbest.Foranother,inacompetingsociety,itisnoteasytofindagoodjob.Lastbutnotleast,themoretimesyouworkjob,themorewell-paidjoboppitunitiesyoucanget.

Somepeople,however,theyhavedifferentattitudethattheyoftenchangejob,First,theysaidwokingatoneplaceforalongtime,theywillloseinterestedinwoking.What'smore,someyoungpeoplearguethattheyhavemoretimetofindingthebestjobforthemseleves.sotheychangetheirjob.Finally,wokingindifferentjobcanhozisontheirvisions.

Asfarasiamconcered,iaminfavorofpeopleshouldn'tchangethewokeveryoftenbacauseifthecanputtheirheartinonework,nomatterwhateverworktheyhavethewilldothebestinthewoke,andhaveawonderfullifeinthefuture.