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【帮我看看我写的初一英语作文有语法错误吗MylastvacationMylastvacation,lwassohappy.becauselwenttomygrandmother'shome.therehaveabeautifulbeach!llovethere!Inthemorning,wewenttothebeach.thesunwasbeautifulandt】
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帮我看看我写的初一英语作文有语法错误吗
MylastvacationMylastvacation,lwassohappy.becauselwenttomygrandmother'shome.therehaveabeautifulbeach!llovethere!Inthemorning,wewenttothebeach.thesunwasbeautifulandthebeachwastoobig!Tahtmademefeelexcited!wedecidedtoplayonthebeachallday.Iplayedandswimedinthewatherwithmysister.Inthenoon,Ifelthungrybutididn'tfindarestaurant.Asmallgirlhelpedmefindtherestaurant.Ihadalittlefood,thefoolwasjustsoso,butididn'tmindthem.Intheafternoon,thewaetherwastoohot!icould'tplaysports.Iliedonthebeach.mymothergavemeaglassofjuice.Idrinkedthejuiceandwatchedmysisterplayvolleyball!Tatemademefellcool,thelifeistoobeautiful!Then,Iplayedbeachvolleyballwithmyparents.Onlastvacation,Ifeltalittletired,bueIhadfunplayingonthebeach!Ilikemylastvacation!
金石鸣回答：
拼写错误较多,注意在你文章里too应该改成so,下面是我修改后的:MylastvacationMylastvacation,lwassohappy.becauselwenttomygrandmother'shome.therewasabeautifulbeach!llovethere!Inthemorni...
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