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请大家帮我修改一下作文（语法错误）,mywintervacationInmywintervacation,Ioftengotothecinematoseeanicefilmwithmyparentsorclassmates.Iusuallydomyhomework.SometimesIhelpmymothertodosomehousework.IfIamf
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请大家帮我修改一下作文（语法错误）,
mywintervacation
Inmywintervacation,Ioftengotothecinematoseeanicefilmwithmyparentsorclassmates.Iusuallydomyhomework.SometimesIhelpmymothertodosomehousework.IfIamfree,Icanhaveapartyathome.AndIcaninvitemyfriendstocometotheparty.Attheparty,wealwaysdoalotofthings.Suchashavehealthyfoodanddrink,singanEnglishsongandmanymore.
陆敬予回答：
一,如果是作为一篇开学后上交的关于寒假做了什么事情的作文,那么应该是用一般过去时态.二,其它语法问题按句来说：1.gotothecinema=seeafilm,这一句啰嗦了.另外,十有七八才用often,你真的10天中有7天去看电影吗?...
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