叙事用一般过去时,写清去的地点,和谁去的,如何去的,做了些什么,你的感受等就ok了 　　如： 　　IwentonatriptoHainanwithmyfamilyduringthissummerholiday.Wewenttherebyplane.Assoonaswegotofftheplane,wewenttothebeachtoseethebeautifulsandandswamthere.Atnoonwefelthungrysowehadlunchataseafoodrestaurantnearthebeach.Weateseafoodlikeshrimpsandcraps,anddranksomeabalonesoup.Wealsowenttotheflowermarketsandboughtlotsofflowers.Besidesweclimbedthemountainandtooklotsofbeautfulpictures. 　　Wealldidn'twanttogohomebecausethescenerywassobeautiful,andthereweresomanyotherexcitingthingstotry,butsadlyitwastimeforustogo. 　　Itwasdefinitelyanexcitingtrip.IfIhaveachance,Iwillgothereagain. 　　不明白的再问哟,请及时采纳,多谢!