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请大家看看这封短信有什么语法错误吗?DearLi:Thanksforyourpertinentsuggestions.Ihavealreadydeletedandchangedsomeunpropriatewords,andmadesomeadjustmentsinmyarticles.What'smore,therecommendationsarealsowrittenbym
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请大家看看这封短信有什么语法错误吗?
DearLi:
Thanksforyourpertinentsuggestions.Ihavealreadydeletedandchangedsomeunpropriatewords,andmadesomeadjustmentsinmyarticles.What'smore,therecommendationsarealsowrittenbymyselfbecasemyreferreessaidtheywerebusysotheyaskedmetowritethemandtheywillsigntheirnamesatlast.Ifyouhaveanymoreadvices,pleasedoletmeknow.
MymobilephonenumberisXX,myhomenumberisXX.YoucancallmewheneveryouarefreeforIwilldevoteallmyenergytopreparefortheapplicationsrecentlysoIcanansweryourphonecallatanytime.AndIthinkitisahonortotalktoawarm-heartedladylikeyou.IhavealreadyheardfrommydadthatyouarepursuingsomewelfareundertakingsandIamreallytouchedbyyouractivetiesandwanttolearnfromyou:)
Thanks&Bestregards
刘志俭回答：
delete：remove
unpropriate:inappropriate
去掉"so"
towrite"to"加上them
去掉“more"advice
devoteallmyenergyto"preparing"
"my"honor
"acitiveties":activities
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