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广东地区考生,小作文满分15大作文25,请点评给分,

1.课外活动时间：每周一三五4-5pm

2.活动项目：体育运动、阅读、唱歌、乐器演奏、英语游戏等.

3.最受欢迎的项目：电脑、唱歌、钢琴

4.学生的反应：喜欢该课外活动,能放松心情、校园生活更丰富充实

5.希望和建议：更多课外活动时间,减少作业量.多组织社会实践.

After-classactivitiesareheldfrom4pmto5pmoneveryMonday.WednesdayandFridayinourschool.PhysicalexercisereadingsingingmusicalinstrumentplayingandEnglishgamesareincluded.Themostpopularactivitiesarecomputerssingingandpianos.Theresponsesofthestudentsindicatethattheyliketheseafter-classactivitiesforthereasonthattheycannotonlyrelaxandrefreshtheirmindsbutalsomaketheirschoollifemorewonderful.Weareadvisedthatweshouldspendmoretimetodoafter-classactivitiesandwealsohopethatwecouldletstudentsdolesshomeworkandorganizethemtoparticipateinsocialactivitiesmore.

大作文：1.以30词概括短文内容略）

2.120词谈对“学生的学习错误由谁改正”的看法,包括：1.你是如何看待自己的语言错误.2.你的老师如何对待你的语言错误.3.你对老师的做法持什么看法?为什么?

Howtofaceyourlanguagemistakes?

Thepassagemainlypointsoutthatteachersplayanincorrectroleinchildren'sworkjudgementsandchildrenhavetheabilitiestolearnbythemselves.Thus,childrenshouldcorrecttheirmistakesindependently.

Itremindsmeofmyown.IalwaystriedtocorrectmyownlanguagemistakeswhenIwasachild.ButgraduallyIfoundthatevenaftercorrectionIwasstillwrongbecauseoflackingofexperiencescomparedtotheadults.Consequently,IrealizedthatIshouldalsoaskmyparentsorteachersforhelp.OnlyinthiswaycanIlearntherightlanguageusages.

Asformyteacher,shealwaysgivesmesometipsandletmetrytofigurethemistakesoutbymyselfinsteadofpointthemoutdirectly.I'mapprovalofitbecauseitcanhelpmegainabetterunderstandingofmymistakes.Furthermore,Icannotonlyrealizemyfaultsbutalsoformagoodhabitofsolvingproblemsindependentlythroughthecorrectingprocess.

Inaword,weshouldcombineourownthoughtsandourteachers'helptogetherwhenfacingoutlanguagemistakes.Bydoingso,wewillgraduallyfindthatwehavetheabilitytosolveproblemsbyourownoneday.