问题标题：
能帮我看一下,这篇作文有错吗Thecomputerwasamongthegreatestinventionsofthetwentiethcentury.Itisaveryusefulchannelforstudy.Thecomputerhasmanyadvantages.Youcanusethecomputertodoonlineshopping.YoucanchatwithNe
问题描述：
能帮我看一下,这篇作文有错吗
Thecomputerwasamongthegreatestinventionsofthetwentiethcentury.Itisaveryusefulchannelforstudy.
Thecomputerhasmanyadvantages.Youcanusethecomputertodoonlineshopping.YoucanchatwithNet'palsallovertheworld.YoucanbuyallkindsofthingsontheInternet.Forexample,youcanorderfood,booksandCDsonline.
Inbrief,computershavemadeourliveseasierandmoreenjoyable.
段会川回答：
among改为oneof并把was改成isofthetwentiethcentury介词改为in,itisaveryusefulchannel……这句话有点像中式英语,可以用Itisabsolutlyhelpfulforourstudy.三句youcan前可以加一些连词,最后一个可以...
点击显示
作文推荐