问题标题：
帮我把这篇英语作文改成过去式,有不好的地方帮我修改一下Lastweekend.Inthemorning,Igooutplaywithmygrandparents!Wecametothepark,wheretheairisgood,therearemanybeautifulflowersandtrees.Therearemanye
问题描述：
帮我把这篇英语作文改成过去式,有不好的地方帮我修改一下
Lastweekend.Inthemorning,Igooutplaywithmygrandparents!Wecametothepark,wheretheairisgood,therearemanybeautifulflowersandtrees.Therearemanyelderlypeopleintheexercise,mygrandparentsaredoingtheexercise,thisisagoodplace.Intheafternoon,IwenttotheBoulderDam,Itookmanyphotos,Imetoneofmyclassmatesandhisparents,thisisahappySunday,Iamveryhappy.
戴华平回答：
Lastweekend.Inthemorning,Iwentoutplaywithmygrandparents!Wecametothepark,wheretheairwasgood,thereweremanybeautifulflowersandtrees.Thereweremanyelderlypeopleintheexercise,mygrandparentsweredoingtheexercise,thisisagoodplace.Intheafternoon,IwenttotheBoulderDam,Itookmanyphotos,Imetoneofmyclassmatesandhisparents,thisisahappySunday,Iamveryhappy.
帮你改过了,只是文中好像有一些语法错误
钱王平回答：
没事没事，如果有一些语法错误的，帮我改一下好么，意思变了没关系。。。
戴华平回答：
OK
钱王平回答：
嗯嗯，谢谢，感激不尽
戴华平回答：
LastSunday.Inthemorning,Iwenttotheparkwithmygrandparents!Theairwasgood,thereweremanybeautifulflowersandtrees.Manyoldpeopleweredoingmorningexercise,mygrandparentsweredoingmorningexercisetoo.thisisagoodplace.Intheafternoon,IwenttotheBoulderDam,Itookmanyphotos,Imetoneofmyclassmatesandhisparents,thisisahappySunday,Ifeltveryhappy.最好把作文的整个意思或者提纲发一下。
钱王平回答：
没什么提纲，就是胡乱写的，，，主题就是Ahappyweekend，我也没什么要求，交上去能有5分就可以了
戴华平回答：
哦
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