字典翻译 问答 小学 英语 【哪位英语好的,帮忙看一下这篇文章的语法和拼写错误.Whenpeoplethinkofsummer,theythink"hot."Well,itreallyis.Thestrongsunshineandhightemperaturesmakeyousweatallday.Onsuchhotdays,aglassoficewatermaynotquit】
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【哪位英语好的,帮忙看一下这篇文章的语法和拼写错误.Whenpeoplethinkofsummer,theythink"hot."Well,itreallyis.Thestrongsunshineandhightemperaturesmakeyousweatallday.Onsuchhotdays,aglassoficewatermaynotquit】
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哪位英语好的,帮忙看一下这篇文章的语法和拼写错误.

Whenpeoplethinkofsummer,theythink"hot."Well,itreallyis.Thestrongsunshineandhightemperaturesmakeyousweatallday.Onsuchhotdays,aglassoficewatermaynotquitesatisfyyourneeds,sowhynottrysomeicecream?Andtodaymytopicis“icecream”.

Tothisday,thehistoryoficecreamremainsamystery.However,manysaythatthefirsticecreamiscreditedtoEmperorNeroofRome.Itwasamixtureofsnow,nectar,fruitpulp,andhoney.OthersproclaimthatMarcoPolo,a13thcenturyadventurer,broughticecreamtoEuropefromtheFarEast.

Comparedwithyearsbefore,newtypesoficecreamturnupeverysummer.Icecreamisnolongerjustamixconsistingofmilkproducts,sugar,cornsyrup,andflavoring.Itmayalsocontaineggproducts,stabilizers,emulsifiers,andotheringredientsderivedfromnon-milksubstances.Sotodayicecreamhasalotoftaste,suchas:chocolateicecream,strawberryicecream,milkicecreamandsoon.However,thefavoriteflavormaybetheclassicvanilla.Thencomeschocolate,strawberry,Neapolitan,andchocolatechip.

withmoreandmoreicecreamshopsallaround,therearemanyplacesofferingacoolandquietplacetoenjoyyouricecream.Let'stakealook.

HaagenDazs

Thisisoneofthemostfamousicecreambrandsandhasbecome

quitepopularinChina'sbigcitieslikeBeijingandShanghai.

Thenicedecorationsandquietenvironmentmakeupforsuch

highprices.

Baskin-Robbins

ThisicecreamchaincametoChinain1993.TheChinesenamefor

Baskin-Robbinsis"31icecreams,"boastingthefactthatthey

canofferyouadifferentflavoreverydayofthemonth.Each

Baskin-Robbinshasthesamesimpledesign,butthiscertainly

doesnotaffectthetaste.

TCBY

TCBYstandsfor"TheCountry'sBestYogurt,"andisan

Americanbrandsellingsoftandfrozenyogurtandicecream.

MondoGelatoandTIAMOOffersItalianicecream.

Valentino

Valentinoisachocolateshop,buttopeoplethatvisitoften,

theicecreamismostattractive.Althoughthevarietyofice

creamislimited,theflavorisoutstanding.

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  第一段:第一句:最好改为:Whatdopeoplethinkofsummer?Theymaysay,it'stoohot,andit'satrue.第二句:可改用复句(可丰富文章语言)Thesunshineissostrongandthetemperatureissohighthatmak...
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