问题标题：
帮忙看看这篇英语哪些错了?Aseveryoneknows,Englishisveryimportanttoday.Ithasbeenusedeverywhereintheworld.IfwecanspeakEnglishwell,wewillhavemorechancetosucceed.BecausEnglishisveryprevalencenow.IloveEnglish,itg
问题描述：
帮忙看看这篇英语哪些错了?
Aseveryoneknows,Englishisveryimportanttoday.Ithasbeenusedeverywhereintheworld.IfwecanspeakEnglishwell,wewillhavemorechancetosucceed.BecausEnglishisveryprevalencenow.
IloveEnglish,itgivesmeacolorfuldream.IhopeIcantravelaroundtheworldoneday.WithmygoodEnglish,Icanmakefriendswithmanypeoplefromdifferentcontries.Ithinkitisveryinteresting.
Anddoyoukonw?
Ifyouwanttobeloved,youshouldlearntoloveandbelovable.SoIbelieveasIloveEnglisheveryday,itwilllovemetoo.
SOIbelieveoneday,IcanspeakEnglishverywell
林晓强回答：
第二行,tobesuccessful
oneday改成someday吧
倒数第二段,learnhowtoloveandhowtobeloved
SoIbelieveifIlove……
最后最好改成,IthinkIcanspeakEnglishwellinthefuture,不重复
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