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【高二英语短文改错greatchangeshavebeenGreatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinourschool.Whenenteringtheschool,youseeabiggardeninmiddleofit,withrowsoftreesanywhere.Andtherearebuildingsforteaching,experimenrsanddormitories】
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高二英语短文改错greatchangeshavebeen
Greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinourschool.Whenenteringtheschool,youseeabiggardeninmiddleofit,withrowsoftreesanywhere.Andtherearebuildingsforteaching,experimenrsanddormitories,thatareallequippedwiththemostadvancedequipment.Afterclass,wealsodosomesportsinthenewlystadiumorontheplayground.Everymoring,theloudvoiceofreadingbookcanbeheardintheschool.What'smore,studentscanbeseentogetherdiscussingsomelearningproblemsorexchangeideas.Sowhatappealstousmostisthesmilingfacesinteachersandstudents.Wearelivinglikembmersofabigfamily.Inaword,Ienjoyedmyschoollifesomuch
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Greatchangeshave【been】takenplaceinourschool.Whenenteringtheschool,youseeabiggardenin【middle】ofit,withrowsoftrees【anywhere】.Andtherearebuildingsforteaching,experimenrsanddormitories,【that】areallequippedwiththemostadvancedequipment.Afterclass,wealsodosomesportsinthe【newly】stadiumorontheplayground.Everymoring,theloudvoiceofreading【book】canbeheardintheschool.What'smore,studentscanbeseentogetherdiscussingsomelearningproblemsor【exchange】ideas.【So】whatappealstousmostisthesmilingfaces【in】teachersandstudents.Wearelivinglikembmersofabigfamily.Inaword,I【enjoyed】myschoollifesomuch.
除去标点符号和几个笔误(应该是“指误”),还有以下10个错误:
1.been删除
2.middle改为themiddle或thecenter(center更好)
3.anywhere改为everywhere
4.that改为which
5.newly改为new
6.book改为books
7.exchange改为exchanging
8.So改为But
9.in改为of
10.enjoyed改为enjoy
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