Hello,mynameisMinWen,Icomefromthirdjuniorhighschool,myhobbyisreading,extractssomegoodwordsandmakingfriends,Iamacheerfulgirl,Ihopeinthisclasscanknowmorefriends.
Inthisperiodoffivedaysofmilitarytraining,Ilearnedalotofthings.Firstofall,wejusttothenewmilitarytrainingupschoolthatblunderingmood,sothatwecanthestaticunderhearttolearn.Then,letmeexperienceamilitarytraininghard,butalsoletmerealizethateventhoughthefutureiswhatsetbacks,lessthanhalfofthem,soshouldstrivetosurvive.Finally,thefriendshipisandinstructors.WhatimpressedmemostistheinstructorsandstaffHaninstructorsseason.Quaternarystafffunnythatweinthemilitarytraininggetsalotoffun.KoreainstructorsstrictisIlearnedthemostbasicsense,bestrictwithoneself.Whentheyleavealotofclassmateswascrying.Koreainstructorsaid:"wejustinyourlifesometraveler,youmusthavethecouragetofirmlygoahead."
Ibelieve,myfuturewillbefearlessagainstwaves,towardthedreamwalk.
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