【帮我修改一下英文作文"关于童年"原文意思不能变,挑出病句.方法：先找出病句,然后修改,并简要说明错在哪.最后可以批评我一下,指出不足.我会虚心接受,AMemoryOfMyChildhoodAllmymemoriesofmych】|小学作文问答-字典翻译问答网

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【帮我修改一下英文作文"关于童年"原文意思不能变,挑出病句.方法：先找出病句,然后修改,并简要说明错在哪.最后可以批评我一下,指出不足.我会虚心接受,AMemoryOfMyChildhoodAllmymemoriesofmych】

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帮我修改一下英文作文"关于童年"

原文意思不能变,挑出病句.

方法：先找出病句,然后修改,并简要说明错在哪.

最后可以批评我一下,指出不足.我会虚心接受,

AMemoryOfMyChildhood

Allmymemoriesofmychildhoodgatherroundmygrandparents.WhenIwasgrowinguptheyarealwayswithme.theylovemeeventhoughIwasalittledemon.Theytaughtmehowtobeagoodman,andmygrandmothersometimestoldstoriestomewhenIwenttobedforasleep.Thenwhenmorningcametheyoftenboughtagoodbreakfastforme,andIenjoymychildhoodeveryminute.

OnedaymorningtheytookmetothecountrysidebytrainwhenIwassevenyearsold.Wewenttoavillagewhichistheirhometown.Onthewaytothecountry,itwashotoutsidebecauseitwassummer,butIwasveryexcitedbecauseIhadnevertravelledonatrainbefore.Isatnearthewindowandsangsongs,soonIbegantofeelhappier.Thenwegotoffthetrainandwalkedforatime.Finallywearrived.ForthefirsttimeIsawlotsofbeautifulmountainsandhills.Afterawhile,Icouldseeavillagenearawood.”Hereweare!”Mygrandfathersaidhappily,Ifoundasmileonhisface.Afterwehadhadlunch,Iwentoutforpleasure.Iwalkedwithoutashoe,wentdownthecountryroadsunderthebluesky.

Bytomorrowafternoonmygrandfathertookmeoutandwentintothewood.”Let’sgoandtakeawalk,myboy,”saidmygrandfather.“Areyoufeelinghot?”Heaskedme.”Yes,Iam!”mymouthopen.Andthenheaskedme,”Doyoulikeswimming?”’Yes,ofcourseIdo!’Ianswered.Thenhesmiledandtookmewalkedpastlotsofbeautifultrees.Infact,therearetreeseverywhere.Atlastwestopped.SuddenlyIsawasmallpoolinfrontofme,thewaterisclear.Igotveryhappy,andIhadafantastictimeswimmingwithmygrandfather.

‘Wheredidyougo?’mygrandmotherquestioneduswhenwecame.’It’sasecret.’Iansweredandlaughed.Mygrandfatherbegantolaugh,too.

Intheeveningwehadwonderfuldinner.

Forweeks.SomedaysIwentoutforpleasure,somedaysIplayedinsidewithpigsandducks.ButIalwayshelpedmygrandprentsmadeafireforcooksupper.

welivedhappilyinourcountry.

Inconclusion,IlikecountrylifebecauseIcanlivingwithoutvexation.

董媛回答：

　　AMemoryOfMyChildhood 　　Allofmymemoriesofmychildhoodgatherroundmygrandparents.WhenIwasgrowinguptheywerealwayswithme.theylovedmeeventhoughIwasalittledemon.Theytaughtmehowtobeagoodman,andmygrandmothersometimestoldstoriestomewhenIwenttobedforasleep.Thenwhenmorningcametheyoftenboughtagoodbreakfastforme,andIenjoymychildhoodeveryminute. 　　OnedaymorningtheytookmetothecountrysidebytrainwhenIwassevenyearsold.Wewenttoavillage,theirhometown.Onthewaytothecountry,itwashotoutsidebecauseitwassummer,butIwasveryexcitedbecauseIhadnevertravelledonatrainbefore.Isatnearthewindowandsangsongs,soonIbegantofeelhappier.Thenwegotoffthetrainandwalkedforatime.Finallywearrived.itwasthefirsttimeIsawlotsofbeautifulmountainsandhills.Afterawhile,Icouldseeavillagenearawood.”Hereweare!”Mygrandfathersaidhappily,Ifoundasmileonhisface.Afterwehadhadlunch,Iwentoutforpleasure.Iwalkedbarefeetedlyandwentdownthecountryroadsunderthebluesky. 　　Bytomorrowafternoonmygrandfathertookmeoutandwentintothewood.”Let’sgoandtakeawalk,myboy,”saidmygrandfather.“Areyoufeelinghot?”Heaskedme.”Yes,Iam!”Ianswered.Andthenheaskedme,”Doyoulikeswimming?”’Yes,ofcourseIdo!’Ianswered.Thenhesmiledandtookmewalkingpastlotsofbeautifultrees.Infact,thereweretreeseverywhere.Atlastwestopped.SuddenlyIsawasmallpoolinfrontofme,thewaterisclear.Igotveryhappy,andIhadafantastictimeswimmingwithmygrandfather. 　　‘Wheredidyougo?’mygrandmotherquestioneduswhenwecame.’It’sasecret.’Iansweredlaughing.Mygrandfatherbegantolaugh,too. 　　Intheeveningwehadwonderfuldinner. 　　Forweeks.SomedaysIwentoutforpleasure,somedaysIplayedwithpigsandducks.ButIalwayshelpedmygrandprentsmadeafireforsupper. 　　welivedhappilyinourcountry. 　　Inconclusion,IlikecountrylifebecauseIcanlivewithoutvexation!

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