雅思作文批改Inthefieldofcrimination,itisahighlydebatableissuethatwhetherthecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationshouldtakeintoconsideration.Somepeopleadvocatethatfixedpunishmentsforeachtypepfcrimear|小学作文问答-字典翻译问答网

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雅思作文批改Inthefieldofcrimination,itisahighlydebatableissuethatwhetherthecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationshouldtakeintoconsideration.Somepeopleadvocatethatfixedpunishmentsforeachtypepfcrimear

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Inthefieldofcrimination,itisahighlydebatableissuethatwhetherthecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationshouldtakeintoconsideration.Somepeopleadvocatethatfixedpunishmentsforeachtypepfcrimearenecessarytoupholdjustice.Howeverinmyopinion,itisarbitrarytocriminatesomeonewithoutathoughtofthecriminalmotive.

Firstly,fixedpunishmentdohaveadeterringeffectonsociety.Ifthecriminalsknowtheywillbesubjecttoacertainpunishment,theywillreconsidercommittingthecrime.Thisdeterringeffecthelptobuildsocialstabilityandsafetythroughdeclinethrateofcrime.

Secondly,sincepunishmentswerefixed,thosecriminalswouldnotbeabletoconvincethecourtforunguilt.Thiswouldstopthecunningcrimialsfromescapetheirpunishments.

But,letusthinkitover.Canapersonkillinginself-defensecomparedtoaheartlessmuder?Canapersonsteallingtofeedhisstarvingchildrencomparedtoarobberwithdrugaddiction?Theanswersareobviouseventheydidthesamecrime.Thus,ifwedonottakethecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationintoaccount,thelawswillbenothingbutcold-hearted.

Inmyopinion,anintermediarypositionbetweenbothsolutionsistheperfectwaytoensurejusticeandequity.Wewouldnotletapersonwithgulitescapeandwouldnotpunishevenasingleinnocence.Sincetherestilllotsofspaceforthelawstodevelop,ourgovernmentshouldthinkmoreabouthumanrightsandgivethosewhocrimewithoutintentionachancetoturntoanewleaf.

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　　Inthefieldof(crimination要改为criminology),itisahighlydebatableissuethatwhetherthecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationshouldtakeintoconsideration.Somepeopleadvocatethatfixedpunishmentsforeachtypepf(of)crimearenecessarytoupholdjustice.Howeverinmyopinion,itisarbitrarytocriminatesomeonewithoutathoughtofthecriminalmotive. 　　Firstly,fixedpunishment(do改为does)haveadeterringeffectonsociety.Ifthecriminalsknowtheywillbesubjecttoacertainpunishment,theywillreconsidercommittingthecrime.Thisdeterringeffect(help要加s)tobuildsocialstabilityandsafetythroughdeclinetherateofcrime. 　　Secondly,sincepunishmentswerefixed,thosecriminalswouldnotbeabletoconvincethecourt(forunguilt改为ofinnocence).Thiswouldstopthecunningcriminalsfromescapetheirpunishments. 　　But,letusthinkitover.Canapersonkillinginself-defensecomparedtoaheartless(muder是murder)?Canaperson(steallingstealing一个l)tofeedhisstarvingchildrencomparedtoarobberwithdrugaddiction?Theanswersareobviouseventheydidthesamecrime.Thus,ifwedonottakethecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivation(into是一个字into)account,thelawswillbenothingbutcold-hearted. 　　Inmyopinion,anintermediarypositionbetweenbothsolutionsistheperfectwaytoensurejusticeandequity.Wewouldnotletapersonwith(gulit是guilt)escapeandwouldnotpunishevenasingleinnocence.Sincetherestilllotsofspaceforthelawstodevelop,ourgovernmentshouldthinkmoreabouthumanrightsandgivethosewhocrimewithoutintentionachancetoturntoanewleaf. 　　全文基本上些没有大错,只是几个错字,已替你更正了,

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