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ThelinechartdemonstratesdataabouttraveltoandfromBritainwhilethebarchartindicatesinformationaboutthemostfamousstatesforBritaininhabitentstovisit
Ascanbeseenfromthelinechart,thenumberoftheUKvisitorsandthefigurefortheforeignvisitorswhovisitedtotheUKbotharrivedataround10millionsrespectivelyin1979.However,therewasasharpgrowinthenumberofUKvisitorswhilethenumberofforeignvisitorsrosegradullyfrom1985to1999.Thenumberofukvisitorsarrivedatalmost53millionsandthefigurefortheforeignstoodataround28millions.
Accordingtothebarchart,itcanbeclearlyseenthemostUKvisitorsvisitedSpainandFrancein1999.Tobemoreexact,UKvisitorsvisited5mostpopularstatesweremadeupofTurkey(around2.5millions),Greece(around3millions),USA(around4millions)andthefrance(around11.5millions)
Ingeneral,thenumberoftheUKvisitorsandthenumberofthevisitorswhovisitedtotheUKwereallincreaseduringtheperiodbetween1979and1999.OntehotherhandSpinaandtheFrancewerethemostpopularcountriesforUKinhabitents.