等等,我正在改,比较可靠. 　　第一篇： 　　Itsnowedlastnight.Thismorningtheroad【加was】coveredwithsnow,butthere【we're——were估计你打错了】stillalot【加of】bikescomingandgoing.SuddenlyIsawawoman【walk——fall】offherbike.Thewoman【lied—lay】onthegroundandcouldn'tgetup.Iranuptoherandtriedtohelpher,【and——but】shestillcouldn'tstandupbecauseherrightleg【is——was】broken.Atthatmoment.【the——a】policemancameoverwhenhesawthis.Immediately,hecalled【at去掉】ataxi.Thetaxidriversentthewomanto【the】nearesthospital.ThereItelephonedthewoman'sofficeandtoldamantherethe【wholly—whole】story.【Seen——Seeing】thatthewomanwaswelllookedafter,Isaidgoodbyetoher.BeforeIleft,theladythankedmeagainangagain. 　　麻烦你再对一下原文,看看是否有打错的,多出了错误处. 　　第二篇： 　　WhenIwasdoingmyhomework,thephonerang.【She——It】wasJane.Shewantedtospeaktomy【older——elder】brother.itoldherthathehadleft【for去掉】homejustafewminutesbefore.Iaskedhertoringupagaintonight,【and-but】shesaid【tjat_that】shewouldn'tbefree.SoIaskedher【that——if/whether】she'dliketoleaveamessage.Janesaidtherewouldbe【the——a】lectureonEnglishpoetrybya【visited——visiting】professorintheLectureHall【at】around6:00tomorrowevening.Andsheaskedmetotellmybrothernot【加to】belate.Shewouldwaitforhimatthegate.ItoldherIwouldtellhim【direct——directly】【加he】cameback. 　　原文还是有打错的啊,不过,该改的应该都改出来了.希望能够帮到你!