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高考英语作文求批改（30分）(04浙江卷)DearSteve,I’msopleasedtolearnthatyouandyourclassmatesarelearningChinese.I’dliketorecommendthefollowingtwodictionaries.OnceIgotthebookstoreIhaveseensucha
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高考英语作文求批改（30分）(04浙江卷)
DearSteve,
I’msopleasedtolearnthatyouandyourclassmatesarelearningChinese.
I’dliketorecommendthefollowingtwodictionaries.
OnceIgotthebookstoreIhaveseensuchagreatdictionarynamedTheEnglish-ChineseChinese-EnglishDictionary(ECCED).Ithasincluded18000Englishwordsand20000Chinesewords.Muchtomysurprise,itonlytakesyoufiftytwoRMB.Manygreatexampleandthemannerofusingthewordshavebeencollected.Ofcourse,asforme,IpreferXinhuaDictionary(XD)more.ItmustbemoresuitableforthenewlearnerstostudyChinese.
Itmaybeagreathelptoyou.Pleaseletmeknowifyouwantmetobuythesedictionaries.
Yours,
LiYue
李允回答：
总体不错.但有点生硬,有几个小错误.把hasincluded改为includes好些,因为这是对事实的叙述,用一般现在时态好些.把takes改为costs好些,虽然都有花费的意思,但若果用takes的话,最好后面要加todosth.还有50...
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