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【精通英语的帮我批改下我的作文2MyambitionMyambitionistobeabusinessman.First,asabusinessman,ImuststudyhardsothatIamabletopassentranceexaminationforgooduniversity.Afterthat,Iwillfoundacompany.NotonlyIshouldb】
问题描述：
精通英语的帮我批改下我的作文2
Myambition
Myambitionistobeabusinessman.First,asabusinessman,
ImuststudyhardsothatIamabletopassentranceexaminationforgooduniversity.Afterthat,Iwillfoundacompany.NotonlyIshouldbeverydiligent,butalsofindagoodideatodevelopmycompany.Forexample,Ineedtalentedpersontojoinmycompanytocreatenewthingtogether.Takeittobeselledbymarket.thenIwillgetmoney,soIcanopenthesecond
company.Bythisway.AtlastIwillbearichman.
刘昶回答：
完全是chinglish……
其他的语法不说了,最起码的talentedperson冠词都没有
哎……没法下笔改啊
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