问题标题：
【帮我看一下我写的这篇英语作文写的对不对!Hello!LookatHarry'sfamilytree.Harry'sgrandfatherisJohnKingandHarry'sgrandmotherisLingdaKing.Look!Harry'sfatherisBillKingandHarry'smotherisAmyKing.Harry'suncleisTomk】
问题描述：
帮我看一下我写的这篇英语作文写的对不对!
Hello!LookatHarry'sfamilytree.Harry'sgrandfatherisJohnKingandHarry'sgrandmotherisLingdaKing.Look!Harry'sfatherisBillKingandHarry'smotherisAmyKing.Harry'suncleisTomkingandHarry'sauntisBettyKing.Oh!Harryhasasister,CathyKing.Harryhasahappyfamily.
万享回答：
你也上初一吧,和我一样.harry's用得太多了,有点重复,有些可以用her.我帮你改了一下：Hello!LookatHarry'sfamilytree.Harry'sgrandfatherisJohnKingandgrandmotherisLingdaKing.Look!HerfatherisBil...
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