英语作文修改“ThePleasureofPainting”

麻烦各位大神把下面这篇英语作文修改一下,比如把一些简单句,改成复杂的从句,

ThePleasureofPainting

Inrecentyears,thereisageneraltendencythatmoreandmorestudentswanttolearndrawing.IamanartstudentandIpaintalotofpictures.Butitisapity,somepeoplethinkpaintingisveryboringandtired.Onthecontrary,Idon'tthinkso.SinceLearningpaintinghasbeenthemostinterestingexperienceI'veeverhad.

Forexample,firstly,paintingcanmakemecalmanditcanliftyourheartalso.WhenI'mpainting,Icanstayawayfromlotsoftrouble.

Secondly,paintingcanimproveourabilityofobservation.Itmakesmediscoverhowbeautifulthelifeis.

Besides,IreallyfeelalotofhappinesswhenI'mpaintingapicturewiththecolorsthatIlike.AlthoughsometimesIcan'tpaintitwell,andIhavetotryitagainandagain,Istillenjoyit.

Immersedinpainting,whatannoyancesandtroublesallwecanforgetabout.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkpaintingcanmakemehappy.Atthesametime,paintingisindispensableforme.Iwillinsiston.

还有词汇方面最好也能润色下o(∩_∩)o