急求这2篇英语作文的修改,越快越好!中考水平以上

1.春节快要到了,你在美国的一位朋友Mike想了解你今年的春节计划,请写一封回信给他,告诉他你打算怎样过春节(80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)

开头:DearMike,

LasttimeyouaskedmewhatIamgoingtododuringtheSpringFestival.NowIwouldliketotellyousthaboutmyplan.(文章开始)Thefamilymembersgettogethertocelebratethefestivalonthedaybeforethefirstdayofanewyearinlunarcalendar.WeenjoydeliciousfoodandwatchthespecialshowforthefestivalonTV.IusuallysetofffirecrackerswithmycousinswhenourparentsarewatchingTV.Webelievethatitmaygetridofbadthings.Forchildren,themostimportantpartoftheFestivalisgettingluckymoney.WebowtotheolderpeopleandwishthemahappyNewYearandtheywillgiveusluckymoneyinredenvelopes.

(结尾)Pleasesendmybestwishestoyourfamily!

Yours,Tom

2.上星期,学校就学生的作业量问题要求各班召开家长会进行讨论.以下是你班家长的观点:多数家长认为作业多有好处,而部分家长则认为作业过多对孩子的成长不利.请你根据下面的提示,用英语作一简要介绍并表明你自己的观点.

MostparentsAfewparents

1)reviewwhatstudentshavelearnedtakealotoftime

2)developstudents’mindscannothaveagoodrest

3)stopstudentsplayingcomputergamescannotdothethingsstudentslike

可适当增加细节,要求意思连贯,语句通顺.词数80左右;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)

开头:Lastweekourclasshadaparents’meeting.Atthemeeting,alltheparentstalkedaboutwhetherdoingalotofhomeworkwasusefulornot.Manyparentsthoughtthatdoingmuchhomeworkwasuseful.

(我的观点开始)Inmyopinion,studentsinouragesshouldn’tbegiventoomuchhomework,wedon’twantalifefullofhomework.Ifthereissomuchhomeworkthatwecannotfinish,somestudentswillbeafraidofthehomework,eventrytostopdoingit.That’sveryterrible.Weneedtimetohavesomesportsandreadsomebooks,nothomeworkanytime.Butnohomeworkisalsohorrible.Toomuchfreetimewillmakestudentsdon’tknowwhattodo.SoIhopeteacherscangiveusthebestandleastexercisestoreviewwhatwehavelearnedandimprovetheknowledge.