修改高中英语作文了

人人都渴望幸福,但有时我们忙于学业忙于工作而忽视了生活中幸福的点点滴滴.你认为幸福是什么?结合生活中的事例阐述你对幸福的理解.

我的作文：

Happinessisavitalmoodwhichmanypeopleneglectfromtimetotime.Inmyopinion,happinessiseasytoachieveifyoualwayskeepausualmind.

Alargemajorityofpeoplethinkthatlifewon’tbeateasewithoutenoughmoneyorhighposition（好的地位）.So,theystriveforthegoalseverydayandhavenohappiness.Infact,theirdefinitiontohappinessisn’texact.

Frommypointofview,happinessisapositiveattitudetolife.Anunexpectedpresent,someencouragingwords,evenabunchoffreshflowerscanmakemehappy.Forme,Ithinkthatthosewhobringhappinesstoothersarethehappiestintheworld.

Lifeisabook,inwhichhappinessistheshinestpart.What’smore,happinessisjustlikeaperfume.Onlywhenyouyourselfhaveit,willotherssmellandshareit.

有些词不知怎么翻才好,就乱写了,因此括号里标注了中文.自知有许多错误!恳请哥哥,姐姐们指出.也希望能从文章结构,文采等方面提出意见和建议,