1.Hello,letmeintroducemyselftoyou.Mynameis你的名字.I'maprettygirl.Myhairisblackandlong.Iliketomakefriendsandgoshopping.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfather,mymotherandI.That'sme,asimpleandhappygirl. 　　2.Ihaveagoodfriend.HernameisLily.Sheisabeautifulgirl.Herhairisblackandlong.Hereyesarebig.Iliketotalkwithher.WhenwegettogetherIalwaysfeelhappy.Ithinkthatiswhywebecomefriend. 　　3.Ilikeshopping.WhenI'mdoingsomeshoppingIfeelveryhappy.BecauseIcangetwhatIwantandwhatIlike.Ilovetogoshoppingwithsomefriends.Sowecanshareouropinionsonthegoods.It'sinteresting. 　　4.Iliveinasmallfamily.Thereareonlythreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfather,mymotherandI.Myfamilygivemelove.WhenI'msadmyparentswillmakemehappy.WhenI'mhappyIcanalsosharemyhappinesstomyparents.Ilovemyfamily. 　　5.Gettingupearlyinthemorningandsoonfinishmybreakfast,Isaygoodbyetomyparentsandgotoschool.Thebusydaybegin.Onweekdaysallthesamethingshappenagainandagain.It'sboringbutnecessary.That'smyday. 　　6.TodayisSunday.Jimgotupearlyandwantedtomeethisfriends.Butwhenhefinishedhisbreakfast,hebrokealloftheplates.Sohehadtocleantheplatesandtowashthefloor.Hefinishedallthethingsinahurrysothathecouldmeethisfriendsontime.Butwhenhefinished,thetimewaspassedandhisfriendshadleft.WhatabaddaydidJim'sdaywas! 　　可以了,合适就给个采纳吧,有什么不对百度hi密我帮你改也行.