字典翻译 问答 小学 英语 【请高人麻烦看看英语作文怎么样Hereisalivelyphotothatamanisdreamingofmoney.Helooksreallynervous.Moneyhasbecomeamentalburdenforhim,whichmakesthemworriedanddepressed.Andbelowthephoto,thereisatopicwhichsaysh】
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【请高人麻烦看看英语作文怎么样Hereisalivelyphotothatamanisdreamingofmoney.Helooksreallynervous.Moneyhasbecomeamentalburdenforhim,whichmakesthemworriedanddepressed.Andbelowthephoto,thereisatopicwhichsaysh】
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请高人麻烦看看英语作文怎么样

Hereisalivelyphotothatamanisdreamingofmoney.Helooksreallynervous.Moneyhasbecomeamentalburdenforhim,whichmakesthemworriedanddepressed.Andbelowthephoto,thereisatopicwhichsayshappinessmaybedon'tmerelyrelyonmoney.

Itisclearthatthepictureimpliesaseriousphenomenoninoursocietytoday:worshipmoney.Nowadaysalotofpeoplewanttoearnmuchmoney,indeed,moneycanbringseveralofsubstancethatcandevelopourdailylife,suchashouses,cars,andanythingelse.Butwecan’tonlypursuemoney.Ifwejustpursuingwealth,itmayleadsustoawrongway,evenresultincriminal.Toexaminethis,let’stakealookofexampleofthebossofGuomei.HeonceworkedveryhardandbecameoneofbestdealerinChina.Butnowheisstayinthejail,becausehecommitscriminalinordertopursuemoney.Whatathought-provokingcaseitis.

Frommypointofview,itisimperativetotakesomeeffectivemeasurestoreversethisphenomenon.Firstly,therightvaluesshouldbetaughtinschool,secondlythecorrectattitudeofmoneyshouldbeguidedbygovernment.Onlyinthiswaycanwebuiltaharmonioussocietyandmaintainthegoodmoralcharacterinourwholesociety.

这样的作文考研大作文能的几分,感激不尽

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  能得几分不知道,不过,你的作文里面,有很silly的错误,比如第二行那个them应该是him吧.,除掉这个不说,你太注重词汇的运用的,不是词汇越难越高级,作文的分数就越高,如果对于自己不熟悉的词汇,强烈建议别用,因为很容易发...
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