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帮忙修改一篇英文作文,貌似语法问题很多啊……IfIWereAnAlienIfIwereanalienwholivedontheearth,butmissedherhomeverymuch.Itriedtofindthewaytogoback,butIlosedoverandoveragain.Maybesomeday,Iwouldmeeta
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帮忙修改一篇英文作文,貌似语法问题很多啊……
IfIWereAnAlienIfIwereanalienwholivedontheearth,butmissedherhomeverymuch.Itriedtofindthewaytogoback,butIlosedoverandoveragain.Maybesomeday,Iwouldmeetanalienboywhowerethesameasme.Andhesaidtome"Comewithme,girl!"HewouldholdmyhandandIwouldboardhissilverrocketship.Blastofftothestars,justwetwo.Wewouldwhizpasstheplanets,passtheMilkeyWay.Oh,lookatthatstarruledbyapes!Iwouldbakeanapplecakewhilehewasdrivingusthroughsomescrayasteroidthatcouldcrashusintopieces.WewouldlandontheMarswhenhekissedmyalienlips.Throughhardship,wewouldfinallygettohome.VivalatheGreatUnitedMars!
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IfIWereAnAlienIfIwereanalienlivingontheEarth,andImissedmyhomeverymuch,Iwouldtrytofindawayhome.Itriedmanytimesbutfailed.Oneday,Iwouldhavemetanalienboywhowereth...
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