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我是个初中生,老师布置一篇英语作文,是有关"中国梦,我的梦",我试着写了一篇,但总觉得不太好,请指教并改正Everyonehasadream.Forourmotherland,thelargestdreamistomakeitsefforttobecomestrongerandmor
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我是个初中生,老师布置一篇英语作文,是有关"中国梦,我的梦",我试着写了一篇,但总觉得不太好,请指教并改正
Everyonehasadream.Forourmotherland,thelargestdreamistomakeitsefforttobecomestrongerandmorebeautifulintheworld.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ialsohaveadream.Mydreamistobecomeanastronautinthefuture..WhenIwasalittlechild,Ibecameinterestedinscienceandspace.Ireadalotofbooksaboutscienceandspace.IadmiretheastronautsfortheircourageandachievementandIdreamedofwalkinginspaceoneday.ButIknowmydreamwon’tcometrueunlessIdomybest.SoImakeupmymindtolearnasmuchaspossibleatschool.Asthesayinggoes,“Whereisawill,thereisaway”,IbelieveIwillachievemydreamaslongasIsticktomygoal.IhopeIwillmakeacontributiontorealizingChina’sdream.
李雪峰回答：
中央精神贯彻的也太快了吧.中国梦立刻就上来啦.我觉得有改动的句子用括号括出来了.（你后面写国家和自己就不能用everyone做主语了,换一种说法较好）Forourmotherland,thelargestdreamistomakeitseffortt...
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