我现读初二,刚限时做了一份2010年中考北京英语.帮忙修改下,

十、文段表达（15分）

x05根据中外提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信,信的开头恶化结尾已给出,其词数布局如梭完成的回信内.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.

75.假设你叫刘京,是美国中学生托尼的笔友,你收到了他的来信.请给托尼写一封回信,回答他的问题,介绍北京良好的公交服务,并谈谈你的感受.

Hi!LiuJing,

MygrandpaisgoingtoBeijingnextmonthbecauseheahsheardalotaboutthecityandhewouldliketoseeithimself.HesaysthebusserviceinBeijingisverygoodnow,andpeoplecantoanywherebybus.Isheright?Canyoutellmesomethingmoreaboutit?

I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,

Tony

Hi!Tony,

I’mgladtoknowyourgrandpaiscomingtoBeijing.___________________

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Ifyouhavemorequestions,pleaseaskme.

Yours,

LiuJing

我写如下：

HI!Tony,

I’mgladtoknowyourgrandpaiscomingtoBeijing.

Beijingisthecapitalofchina,andthetrafficisgreaterthaneverbefore—especiallythebusservice.Therearesomanybusesontheroadsthewholeday,andyoucantaketwodifferentbusestogotothesameplace.Thebusdrivedowellindriving,andtheyarealsobefriendlytooneanother.Peoplecangoanywherebybus.Ifsomeonedoesn’tknowwhichbusshouldhetake,hecanaskthebusdriveforhelp,andthedriverwilltellhimwithabigsmile.soinmyopinion,thebusserviceinBeijingisthebest.ifIwereyourgrandpa,Iwouldcan’twaittocomehere.

如果能对我写作方面提点建议,更好了.