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Holyplaceinmymind
Doyouhaveafavoriteplace?Maybeeveryonewillsay“yes”.Buttheanswercanbeverydifferent.Ifyouaskme,I’dsay“themuseum”withoutdoubt.Infact,itismorethanthefavorite;museumisaholyplaceinmymind.
Idon’trememberwhenandwhereIwenttoamuseumforthefirsttime.ButIsurelyknowIfellinlovewithitsinceIwas9-year-old.Ijoinedachessclubatthattimeandspentforenoonthereeveryweekend.Sointheafternoon,Iwenttomuseumswithmom.Theywereaboutmanydifferentdomains,suchasastronomy,history,scienceandart.Itwassuchagreatfeeling!
Peoplesaidthatmuseumwasagoodplacetoappreciateandrelax.Itreallywas.Firstofall,itisthequietestplacebesidethelibrary.Thereislittlepeoplehereeverydayandpeopleheremustbegentleones.Then,theculturalatmospheremakespeoplecomfortable.I’manadmirerofthehistoryofEgypt,soit’sparticularlyexcitedformetogototheexhibitionaboutwhatIlove.WhenIstandamongtheantiquehere,I’mpleased.
AlthoughIhavelittletimetospendinthemuseumnow,Ican’tstopmyselflovingtheplace.NotonlydoIfeelgoodhere,butIcanlearnmoreoutoftheclass.Ican’tknowhowthingsbecomeinthefuture,buttheholyplaceinmymindcanbeneverchanged.