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【语文作文:“我的一天”要求:不少于600字中心明确,内容具体,条理清楚,详略得当。写的好追加分】
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语文作文:“我的一天”要求:不少于600字中心明确,内容具体,条理清楚,详略得当。写的好追加分
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以下两篇,仅供参考:1.MyDayMayfirstisaSunday.AnditistheLabor’sDay.Mymothersaidtome:“Openyoureyes!Andlookoutofthewindow.Whatafineday!Let’sgotopark,”Somymother,myclassmateandIwenttothepark.Wetooksomefoodsinmyschoolbag.Onthewaytothepark.Isawtheblueskywithsnow-whiteclouds.Isawpeartreesandsomeappletreesandsoon.Belowthetrees,thereareseveralkindsofflowers.It’scolorful,blue,red,yellow,pink,purple,orangeandwhite.Isawsomeballoonsandbutterfliesinthesky.Iatepopcorn,cornflakes,bananaandlollipop.Theywerewonderful.Intheafternoon,wewenttothezoo.Ivisitedthebirds,mice,cats,dogs,budgies,hamsters,rabbitsandsoon.MayDayismyfavoriteday!2.MyDayIhadawonderfulholidayatspringfestival.Iwenttotheparkwithmyfriends.Wemetateighto'clockattheschoolgate.Wewenttotheparkbybike.Itwasabeautifulday.Wesatunderabigtreeandchatedwitheachother.Wetookaboutsomemoviesandsomefunthings.Wehadlunchthere.Weatehamburgersandsomedrinks,butIknowtheyarenothealthyandnotgoodforus.Thenweplayedsomegames.Wewereallfelltired,butwewereveryhappy!Itwasgreatfun!
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