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MyidolisEdwardElric.HeisthemiancharacterinFullmetalAlchemistwhichisoneofthemostfamousJapaneseanimes.Hismotherdiedbecauseofdiseasewhenhewasonlyalittlechild.HeandhisbrotherAlfonsElricweresosadthattheydecidedtousethealchemytomaketheirmother.Buttheyfailed.Theyonlymadeamonster.AndEdwardevenlosthisleftlagandAlfonslosthisbody.EdwardusedhisrighttoletAlfons’ssoulstayinanarmour.ThenEdwardinstalledthemechanicallegsandarmsandstatthelongjourneywhichhewantedtofindthewaytogettheirrealbodiesbackwithhisbrother.Thattimehewasonlyfourteen.Andhebecametheyongestalchemistinhisworld.Intheendofstory,theysucceededingettingtheirbodiesbackandtheybecamebraveandadamancy.Edwardwasaboywhonevergaveup.Andinhisstory,Ialsolearntanimportantthing.Loveandlifecannotbebackagainwhenonceyouloseorthrowit.Soweshouldtreasureloveandlife