问题标题：
请帮我改一篇高中英语作文,.Sheiswillingtohelpothers,andshehasapositiveattitudetowardseverything.Lastweek,shehelpedanoldmanwhoisseriouslyhurtinthelegonthewaytoschool.Worried,shesenthimtothehospital.Beforel
问题描述：
请帮我改一篇高中英语作文,.Sheiswillingtohelpothers,andshehasapositiveattitudetowardseverything.Lastweek,shehelpedanoldmanwhoisseriouslyhurtinthelegonthewaytoschool.Worried,shesenthimtothehospital.Beforelong,theoldmanfeltbetterandthanksLiualotThereisnodoubtthatLIUdidarightthing.Asforme,IwoulddothesameifIhadbeeninthatsituation.Actually,someonewilltreatitastrpuble,becauseitisdifficultforthemtotrustastranger,evenifanoldman.AsfarasIamconcerned,itisourdutytohelpthosewhoareintrouble.Onlybythiswaycanwemakeourselvesbetterandbetter.
耿振鸿回答：
shehelpedanoldmanwhois改为was
onthewaytoschool,the改成her,不然指代不明,是老人去学校还是she
worried是担心的,形容词,不能直接开头.shewasworriedabouthim,soshe……
themanfeltbetterandthanks(改为thanked)
Iwoulddothesame(+thing)
trouble拼错了
盛明兰回答：
说起来不是有一种形容词作状语的句式吗
耿振鸿回答：
恩，可以这么用的
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