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英语作文评析,正文如下(七年级)Todayitwassunnyday.WangMingwenttoCentPark.Thereweremanypeopleroadingboatsinthelake.Suddenlyasmallgirlfewintothelake.WangMingcan’tswim,buthejumpedintothelakeandpickedth
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英语作文评析,正文如下(七年级)
Todayitwassunnyday.WangMingwenttoCentPark.Thereweremanypeopleroadingboatsinthelake.Suddenlyasmallgirlfewintothelake.WangMingcan’tswim,buthejumpedintothelakeandpickedthesmallgirluptotheboat.Therewereverygratefultohim.
郭永冲回答:
第一句就是病句~
正确修改:It‘ssunny!或Todayisasunnyday.
既然是今天,为什么后文要用过去式呢?
自己修改一下吧~
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