字典翻译 问答 小学 作文 请语法高手们帮个忙,我写作文求改语法错误,麻烦提出何处有错谢谢.30分CarwasinventedbyKarlBenzwhoisaGermanin1844.Nowcarsarethemostpopularvehicleintheworld.Wecanseepeopledrivingtheirowncarseverywher
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请语法高手们帮个忙,我写作文求改语法错误,麻烦提出何处有错谢谢.30分CarwasinventedbyKarlBenzwhoisaGermanin1844.Nowcarsarethemostpopularvehicleintheworld.Wecanseepeopledrivingtheirowncarseverywher
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请语法高手们帮个忙,我写作文求改语法错误,麻烦提出何处有错谢谢.30分

CarwasinventedbyKarlBenzwhoisaGermanin1844.Nowcarsarethemostpopularvehicleintheworld.Wecanseepeopledrivingtheirowncarseverywhere.KarlBenzwhoisthefatheroftheCarcreatedthebestthing

forhumanworld.Theoperatorsofcarsarecalleddrivers.Driversareindifferentage.Someofthenareyoung,Someofthenareold.Buttherearesomequestionsthatweshouldconcernabout:Isthatokayforyoungpeopletodrive?Aretheyreadytodrive?Inmyopinion,youngpeoplearenotsuitablefordriving.Somepeoplegothurtevendiedbyyoungdrivers,whoarecarelessdrivers.

Inchina,mostoftheyoungpeoplearenotgraduatedfromschool.Teachersarestillteachingthemhowtobegoodmen,Theyaretooyoungtodriver.Drivingcarsrequirepeoplenotonlytolearnhowtodrivecars,butalsotheyneedtofellowthedrivingrulesandtobegooddrivers.Unfortunately,mostofChineseyoungdriversarenotgooddriversbecausetheyonlyknowhowtodrive.So,Isuggestthatyoungpeopleshouldnotlearntodrivecarsbecausetheydon’trealizethatdrivingacaralsorequiresresponsibility.

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