字典翻译 问答 小学 英语 【帮我检查一下这篇文章有没有问题Motherland,Ialwayshaveonestrandsofsenseofprideandsenseofresponsibilityasfor.Beingproudisthatthemotherlandalreadyculturehaving5000yearshistory,havecreatedmanybeingworthitcult】
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【帮我检查一下这篇文章有没有问题Motherland,Ialwayshaveonestrandsofsenseofprideandsenseofresponsibilityasfor.Beingproudisthatthemotherlandalreadyculturehaving5000yearshistory,havecreatedmanybeingworthitcult】
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帮我检查一下这篇文章有没有问题

Motherland,Ialwayshaveonestrandsofsenseofprideandsenseofresponsibilityasfor.

Beingproudisthatthemotherlandalreadyculturehaving5000yearshistory,havecreatedmanybeingworthitculturalrelicsandhistoricsitesthatweadore.Calmdownbythatuninterruptedgrowth,ourcountryhaveexperiencedalotofdynastyturbulence,afteroppressingandthewaroutburstforfeudalistsociety,befoundedandopeningtotheoutsideworldtoRepublicofChina,ourcountrypeoplesuccessivelyhassetofftheheadofafamilyformliving,actingonself'sownfreely,ourcountryalreadybecomesaGreatPowernow,alotofproductalreadyentersinternationalmarket,agalaxyoftalentmoreoverallaretohaveafacileimagination,thoughtopenstotheoutsideworld,intelligencesurpasses,Ibelievein,makegreateffortsprocessafewalthoughourcountrydoesnotbelongtothedevelopedcountrynow,wearesuretokeepafootholdontheworld,becomeandthedevelopedcountrypart,ThisisthatIneedtosingthepraisesofandisthatmakesgreatefforts.

Ilovemegoingthroughallthevicissitudesoflifesobutthemotherlandwhonotfallingdownbut,beforehers,haveexperiencedsomanydisturbances,havingbeenreallytomakemebefullofpraise,thatshehasbeenpregnantwithpromisingmyscenerythescenicspotelegantandpretty,heroicfigure,mymotherlandwhostillhasmanymovingonetosongandtearsisfirm,rich,Iamlovingherdeeply.

我怕个别的地方有错误

所以希望大家仔细看看

这不是我自己写的

也不是googl翻译的

是我自己从网上找的

陈勇辉回答:
  onestrandsof   proudthat   weadore时态有问题吗?看看   alotofdynastyturbulence后接复数吧?   befoundedandopeningbe和open的时态应该一致   ourcountrypeople定语修饰   以后再看没时间了
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