有几篇短文改错,
YesterdaymyEnglishteacheraskedeachstudentwrite
acompositiontitle"TheGreatestAchievementofMy
Life".Iwasnotsurewhattowriteaboutit.I'vethought
itoverforalongtime.Ididmanythings.Comingto
America,getajobandmeetingnewpeopleweremy
achievement.Ithinkmygreatestachievementwas
learningEnglish.SometimesIdidn'tunderstandeverything
peopleweresaying,buteachdayIgotbetterorbetter.
Itoldmyteacherthiswasdifficultcompositiontowrite.
Aboveall,itishardtomeasureeverythingyouhavedone
inyourlife.
DearHelen,
ThankyousomuchforyourpartyatChristmasEve.All
ofthemenjoyeditverymuch.Welikedthedishesyouhad
cookedbutwewerehappytolearntheEnglishsongsyoutaught
us.Wehopeyou'llteachusalotmanysongsinthefuture.
We'releavingfromourhometownstospendthewinter
vacations.Itseemsthatmanyofusarehomesickafter
beingawayfromhomeforsuchalongtime.Whatareyour
plans?Willyoujoininthetouristgrouporganizedbyourschool?
We'rebusyprepareforourtrips.Pleaseexcuseus
fornotabletosaygoodbyetoyou.
AnewcomlietelydarkrestauranthasopeninBerlin,
Germany.Dinerscannotseewhattheyeatingandtheyhave
tobeguidedtotheirtablesbywaiter.Twenty-twoofthe
staffareblindpeople.Therestaurant,thatopenedonSeptember
4,2002,aimtohelpguestsfocusonalloftheirsensesrather
thanjusttheysight.Guestsaresayingtohaveaspecialexperienceoftasting,feelingorsmelling.Intheblack
restaurant,dinerscannotchoosecompletedishesfromthemenubuttheycandecidewhethertheywantafish,meatorvegetarian
meal.Aaveragemeallastedaboutthreehours.Andattheendof
thenight,thewaiterstellthecustomerswhattheyhavebeeneating.
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后两篇能不能也帮帮忙