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【有语法错误吗Myambitionistobecomeascientist.Asachild,Ihadmanydreams,butbecomingscientististhemostthingIwanttobe.IlearnedalotthroughbooksandInternet,wishingtogetmuchknowledgeonthescience.Ithinkscientisthasmo】
问题描述：
有语法错误吗Myambitionistobecomeascientist.Asachild,Ihadmanydreams,butbecomingscientististhemostthingIwanttobe.
IlearnedalotthroughbooksandInternet,wishingtogetmuchknowledgeonthescience.Ithinkscientisthasmoreinfluenceonthesociety.IfIcanbeascientist,Icancontributetomymotherland.Thegoalofourlifeistodomorefortheharmonyhappinessofthesociety.Ihopemyambitionanddreamcancometrue.Iamwillingtostudyhardandbecomeascientistinthefuture.
孙开锋回答：
Asachild是“作为一个孩子”,我觉得你的意思是"当我还是个孩子时候",whenIwasachild;
butbecomingscientististhemostthingIwanttobe.改为butbecomingascientistwasmybiggestdream.更通顺些；
Ilearnedalotthroughbooksand(the)Internet
Ithink(a)scientisthasmoreinfluenceonthesociety.
Thegoalofourlifeistodomorefortheharmonyhappinessofthesociety这句中harmony是名词,不知道你为什么还在后面加上happiness,应该去掉吧
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