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Myunforgettabletrip
初二（5）班吴宁然
OnJuly2008,IwenttoEnglandwithmymothertoseemyfather.Hewasstudiedthere.Wewenttomanyinterestingplaces.
FirstIvisitedthesmalltownwelived.It’snotasbigasZibo.Butit’sbeautiful.Weboughtmanythings,suchastelephonecard,food,clothes,andsoon.NextwewenttoCambridgeandOxford.It’sbiggerthananyschoolinChina.ThenwewenttoLondon.It’sthecapitalofEngland.Wesawmanyoldbuildings,suchastheBigBen,theTowerBridge.Therearemanynewbuildings,theLondonEyeandsoonon.AtlastIvisitedtheBirmingham,andsawtheAtlanticOcean.Butwedidn’tswim,becausetheweatherwascold.Ithinkthereisn’tanydifferentbetweentheAtlanticOceanandthePacificOcean.
AndIfoundoneinteresting:InEnglandit’swarmandhumidinsummer.Thetemperatureisabout15℃~20℃.Itrainedcontinually.It’sagoodplacetospendthesummerholidayforChinesepeople.
Ithinkmytripwasfantastic.Ienjoyitalot.Ifyouwantknowmoreabutmytrip,youcancometomuhome,andIcanshowthephotostoyou.