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帮我改改英语作文LiYuchunismyfavoritestar.Sheisveryhandsome,butalsoverycute,therearemanypeoplelikeher.Iamoneofthem.Inthesummerof2005,Ihaveknownher.Shehasalittleface,herskinisverygood.Smalleyes,thinlips.She'
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帮我改改英语作文
LiYuchunismyfavoritestar.Sheisveryhandsome,butalsoverycute,therearemanypeoplelikeher.Iamoneofthem.Inthesummerof2005,Ihaveknownher.Shehasalittleface,herskinisverygood.Smalleyes,thinlips.She'saverygoodtyphoon,therearepowerfulvoices.Shedidnotlikethemake-up,donotliketocry.Shelikestoeat,wholikestosleep,buthowlongarenotfat.Herfavoritesongis"Autumnleave".Ialsolikethesong.Shehasalotofloveforher,shewasconcernedaboutthefans.Theyarecrazyandfervor.IlikeLiYuchun,butIjustquietlysupporther.Ibelieveshewillbesingingontheroadfurtherandfurtheraway.
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LiYuchunismyfavouritestar.Sheisnotonlyveryhandsome,butalsoverycute,manypeoplelikeher.Iamoneofthem.Inthesummerof2005,Iknewher.Shehasaroundface,andherskinisverygood.Sh...
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