MysummerholidayIlikemysummerholidaybecausetherearemanybeautifulmemories.IrememberedmyLastsummerholidayisveryhappy.MyparentsandIvisitedXi'ancitywhichisananicentandniceplace.Overthere,youcanfeelthelonghistoryofChina,therearemanyinterestingplaces.Andwemetsomeforeignfriends.Wetalkedforalongtimeanditwouldmakemerememberforeverbecausethatwasmyfirsttimetocommunicatewithforeigners.ItmademeliketotalkinEnglish.Thissummerholidayiscoming.IPlantolearnsomething.Thisyear,Iwanttolearnswimming,andIhavefoundagoodplacenearmyhomethenIwilljoininthepaintingclass.IwillgotoswimmingpoolonMonday,Wednesday,SaturdaymorningforTuesday,Friday,SundayIwillhavepaintingclass.Fornextsummerholiday,Iwanttobeavolunteertohelpothers.Iwouldliketojoininnumbersoforginationsinmyschool.wecangotovillagewherethereisasmallschool,andIwillbeanEnglishteacherthereforkidsgratuitouslyforabout20days.Thatwillbemymainactivityinmynextholiday.AndifthereismoretimeIwillvisittheoldinmycommunity,anddosomethingforthem.Suchashelpingthemtowashclothes,cleaningroomfortheoldgrany.Iamlookingforwardtostartmynextsummerholiday.MYparentswillbehappywhentheyseewhatIhavedonefortheywillthinkIhavegrownup.第一篇作者写的挺好,我只是把里面的一些语法错误纠正了一下.希望对楼主有所帮助.