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MyDayInWinterVacation

TodayisWednesday,January25th,2006.AndtheSpringFestivalwillcoming.Thisyear,theSpringFestivalisonJanuary29th.So,wemustgetreadybeforethatday.Andtoday,Igohomeat10:00a.m.BecauseIgomygrandparents’homeyesterdaytotakesomethingsfortheSpringFestival.Andthen,at11:45,Ieatsomefoodsfromgrandparents’homeforlunch.Mygrandmothermakesthemforonenight.So,they’reverytastyandnutritional.At1:00p.m,IwatchTV.AllofTVprogramsareabouttheSpringFestival.Ataround3:00,Istarttodomyhomework.Ieatsuperwithmyfatheratabout6:30causetodayweeatalotofseafood.About7:40,Ibybikegoouttoplay.Mostofthepeopleinthewholestreetareinredandveryhappy.TheyhopetheSpringFestivalcomesquickly.

Mydaysinwintervacationareallveryhappy.BecausetheSpringFestivalwillcoming.It’sthesymbolofthehappyandhealth.