两篇： 　　1.MyholidayThissummerIhadawanderfulholiday!notonlybecausemyfriendsandIvisitedtheparkwherewesharethejoys.attherewecouldrelaxingourselves.butalsoweplayedgamestogether.besides,manythingswehaddid,reallygood! 　　2.Inthisholiday,IwenttoHarbin.herewasveryinterestingandIwanttogoandplayinthesnow.TheSnowiswhite,pureandcool.Alotofpeopleareskiing,andsnowmobiling.Ilovethisholiday 　　你自己改一下吧!